 | Has a distinctive voice and point of view appropriate to
subject and audience |
 | Exhibits consistently sound logic |
 | Is unified throughout (Every detail in the "A" essay
supports and develops the thesis.) |
 | Uses an abundance of convincing and relevant detail to
support the topic sentences in the paragraphs |
 | Uses complex ideas and shows evidence of analysis,
synthesis, and evaluation (The writer of the "A" essay clearly understands the
ideas she discusses and conveys that understanding. ) |
 | Shows an awareness of its author's assumptions |
 | Takes into account alternate points of view in dealing
with the complexities of its topic |
 | Fully develops the implications and consequences of its
thesis. |
 | Uses a variety of sentence structures (simple, compound,
and complex sentences) to show the relationship between ideas |
 | Contains virtually no mechanical or grammatical errors |
 | Documents sources according to a recognized academic
format (e.g. MLA or APA) |
 | Has a compelling introduction and conclusion |
 | Exhibits generally sound logic, careful thought, and
engagement with its subject |
 | Is well developed (Uses more than just sufficient
evidence to develop paragraphs) |
 | Has strong paragraph transitions that clarify the
connections between ideas and make explicit the organization of the essay's
argument |
 | Locates opinion or experience in a relevant context |
 | Shows some awareness of the writer's own assumptions |
 | Shows some understanding of the connection among sources
and competing claims |
 | Points toward consequences and implications of thesis |
 | Uses a precise and vivid vocabulary and clear sentences |
 | Is free of serious mechanical and grammatical errors
(e.g. run-on and comma splice sentences, sentence fragments) |
 | Uses sources accurately and appropriately |
 | Fulfills all requirements of the assignment |
 | Addresses the essay topic assigned. If you have proposed
your own topic, it is sufficiently narrowed and focused to be discussed within
the assigned length. |
 | Has an introductory paragraph, several body paragraphs,
and a concluding paragraph |
 | Has a clearly stated thesis or purpose that controls the
whole essay |
 | Demonstrates orderly thinking in organization of essay |
 | Contains unified body paragraphs, all of which begin
with topic sentences that develop and support the thesis |
 | Develops, supports, and clarifies the thesis throughout
with relevant evidence and examples, statistics, testimony, or arguments |
 | Demonstrates connections between ideas--within and
between paragraphs |
 | Inferences are generally sound |
 | Accurately represents source material |
 | Uses clear sentences, correct grammar and mechanics, and
language that is appropriate for the audience and occasion |
 | Demonstrates understanding conventions for quotation,
parenthetical documentation and work cited list when using outside sources |
 | Fulfills all or nearly all requirements of the
assignment |
 | Lacks focus--thesis is unclear or is not fully supported |
 | Lacks organization--difficult to see connections between
topic sentences and thesis, paragraphs lack unity, progression of ideas
unclear or missing |
 | Includes few, if any, appropriate supporting details and
examples |
 | May demonstrate confusion about what is and is not
relevant to its argument |
 | Shows only a minimal understanding of sources |
 | Uses sentence structure and syntax that interfere with
understanding |
 | Contains some major mechanical and grammatical errors as
well as many minor ones |
 | Shows no evidence of revision, editing, or proofreading |
 | Fails to meet major requirements of the assignments |